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🎯 13 Ways Colleges Detect AI in Application Essays

How Admissions Officers Spot the Difference Between Human and AI-Written Responses

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Written by Michelle Mai
Updated over 2 months ago

By Michelle Mai, CPSI Counselor

As AI tools like ChatGPT become more advanced and accessible, students are increasingly tempted to use them to write college admission essays. But admissions officers are getting wise to the signs.

While AI-generated essays may be grammatically correct and well-structured, they often lack the authenticity, specificity, and emotional nuance that human-written essays convey. Here are 13 key clues that can help readers detect AI-generated content—and tips to ensure your writing remains authentically you.


1. Generic or Overly Polished Writing

Clue: The essay sounds smooth but lacks voice, personality, or emotional depth.

Why it’s a sign: AI avoids personal vulnerability and uses generic phrasing.

🧠 AI Example:

“Resilience is a key trait I’ve cultivated to overcome challenges and grow.”

🙋‍♀️ Human Version:

“When I tore my ACL during volleyball semifinals, the grueling rehab taught me more than just physical recovery—it was about rebuilding my confidence step by step.”


2. Repetition of Key Phrases

Clue: Phrases like “teamwork is important” or “leadership helped me grow” appear multiple times.

Why it’s a sign: AI sometimes rephrases the same ideas to meet word count.


3. Broad Generalizations

Clue: Values like “helping others” or “overcoming adversity” are shared without specifics.

Why it’s a sign: AI struggles with nuance and real-world context.


4. Lack of Specific Personal Details

Clue: Vague anecdotes, no names or distinct memories.

Why it’s a sign: AI doesn’t know your life story.

🙋‍♀️ Human Example:

“Leading my Shark Conservation Club, I organized a beach clean-up that removed 200 pounds of trash from our local shores.”


5. Mechanical Structure

Clue: A rigid five-paragraph essay that feels like a school assignment.

Why it’s a sign: AI follows templates closely.


6. Mismatch with the Rest of the Application

Clue: The essay mentions achievements or interests not reflected in activities, transcript, or recs.

Why it’s a sign: AI invents details without aligning with your actual background.


7. Overuse of Advanced Vocabulary

Clue: Sentences feel like a thesaurus explosion.

Why it’s a sign: AI uses complex words to sound smart.

🧠 AI Example:

“My scholastic endeavors have culminated in a prodigious acumen for epistemological pursuits.”

🙋‍♀️ Human Version:

“My love for numbers started when I calculated batting averages for my middle school team.”


8. Unusual Grammatical Choices

Clue: Odd sentence structure, strange transitions, or awkward idioms.

Why it’s a sign: AI still stumbles with nuance in grammar.


9. Lack of Emotional Depth

Clue: No vulnerability or self-reflection.

Why it’s a sign: AI doesn’t experience emotion.

🙋‍♀️ Human Example:

“My palms were clammy, my voice shook, but when I saw the audience nodding, I knew my passion had made an impact.”


10. ClichĂŠ Analogies or Metaphors

Clue: Overused comparisons like “Life is a journey.”

Why it’s a sign: AI defaults to clichés.


11. Too-Early Submission

Clue: The Essay is submitted right after the prompts are released.

Why it’s a sign: AI enables instant draft generation—real drafts take time.


12. Perfectly Balanced but Inauthentic Tone

Clue: The essay touches on all ideal themes—leadership, academics, service—but feels manufactured.

Why it’s a sign: AI knows the formula but not the heart.


13. Generic Supplemental Essays

Clue: No references to specific programs, professors, or campus experiences.

Why it’s a sign: AI can’t personalize unless prompted with details.

🧠 AI Example:

“Your university’s excellent academics and vibrant community make it a perfect fit.”

🙋‍♀️ Human Version:

“The Grossman School’s Entrepreneurship theme aligns with my passion for product innovation, and I’m excited to collaborate in the Catamount Innovation Lab.”


✅ How to Avoid Detection

Using AI as a brainstorming tool is okay, but your final product must reflect you. Here’s how:

  • Add real stories only you can tell

  • Use your own tone and writing quirks

  • Check consistency with the rest of your application

  • Prioritize emotion, vulnerability, and honesty

Admissions readers are trained to spot authenticity. When in doubt, write from the heart—because no AI can replicate you.

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