By Michelle Mai, CPSI Counselor
As AI tools like ChatGPT become more advanced and accessible, students are increasingly tempted to use them to write college admission essays. But admissions officers are getting wise to the signs.
While AI-generated essays may be grammatically correct and well-structured, they often lack the authenticity, specificity, and emotional nuance that human-written essays convey. Here are 13 key clues that can help readers detect AI-generated contentâand tips to ensure your writing remains authentically you.
1. Generic or Overly Polished Writing
Clue: The essay sounds smooth but lacks voice, personality, or emotional depth.
Why itâs a sign: AI avoids personal vulnerability and uses generic phrasing.
đ§ AI Example:
âResilience is a key trait Iâve cultivated to overcome challenges and grow.â
đââď¸ Human Version:
âWhen I tore my ACL during volleyball semifinals, the grueling rehab taught me more than just physical recoveryâit was about rebuilding my confidence step by step.â
2. Repetition of Key Phrases
Clue: Phrases like âteamwork is importantâ or âleadership helped me growâ appear multiple times.
Why itâs a sign: AI sometimes rephrases the same ideas to meet word count.
3. Broad Generalizations
Clue: Values like âhelping othersâ or âovercoming adversityâ are shared without specifics.
Why itâs a sign: AI struggles with nuance and real-world context.
4. Lack of Specific Personal Details
Clue: Vague anecdotes, no names or distinct memories.
Why itâs a sign: AI doesnât know your life story.
đââď¸ Human Example:
âLeading my Shark Conservation Club, I organized a beach clean-up that removed 200 pounds of trash from our local shores.â
5. Mechanical Structure
Clue: A rigid five-paragraph essay that feels like a school assignment.
Why itâs a sign: AI follows templates closely.
6. Mismatch with the Rest of the Application
Clue: The essay mentions achievements or interests not reflected in activities, transcript, or recs.
Why itâs a sign: AI invents details without aligning with your actual background.
7. Overuse of Advanced Vocabulary
Clue: Sentences feel like a thesaurus explosion.
Why itâs a sign: AI uses complex words to sound smart.
đ§ AI Example:
âMy scholastic endeavors have culminated in a prodigious acumen for epistemological pursuits.â
đââď¸ Human Version:
âMy love for numbers started when I calculated batting averages for my middle school team.â
8. Unusual Grammatical Choices
Clue: Odd sentence structure, strange transitions, or awkward idioms.
Why itâs a sign: AI still stumbles with nuance in grammar.
9. Lack of Emotional Depth
Clue: No vulnerability or self-reflection.
Why itâs a sign: AI doesnât experience emotion.
đââď¸ Human Example:
âMy palms were clammy, my voice shook, but when I saw the audience nodding, I knew my passion had made an impact.â
10. ClichĂŠ Analogies or Metaphors
Clue: Overused comparisons like âLife is a journey.â
Why itâs a sign: AI defaults to clichĂŠs.
11. Too-Early Submission
Clue:Â The Essay is submitted right after the prompts are released.
Why itâs a sign: AI enables instant draft generationâreal drafts take time.
12. Perfectly Balanced but Inauthentic Tone
Clue: The essay touches on all ideal themesâleadership, academics, serviceâbut feels manufactured.
Why itâs a sign: AI knows the formula but not the heart.
13. Generic Supplemental Essays
Clue: No references to specific programs, professors, or campus experiences.
Why itâs a sign: AI canât personalize unless prompted with details.
đ§ AI Example:
âYour universityâs excellent academics and vibrant community make it a perfect fit.â
đââď¸ Human Version:
âThe Grossman Schoolâs Entrepreneurship theme aligns with my passion for product innovation, and Iâm excited to collaborate in the Catamount Innovation Lab.â
â How to Avoid Detection
Using AI as a brainstorming tool is okay, but your final product must reflect you. Hereâs how:
Add real stories only you can tell
Use your own tone and writing quirks
Check consistency with the rest of your application
Prioritize emotion, vulnerability, and honesty
Admissions readers are trained to spot authenticity. When in doubt, write from the heartâbecause no AI can replicate you.